When I first showed the film to an audience, notable points from my feedback included:
- The Golfer wanting to buy a mansion needs to be set up at the beginning.
- Some timings need to be worked on.
- The golf post and the fences need re-scaling.
- The aspect ratio needed correcting.*
- The comedy was strong and the audience laughed at most of the jokes.
- The green screen and mix of 2D and stop-motion was very well received.
*Due to a computer problem I was not able to access Adobe Premiere Pro (my preferred editing software) whilst editing the first draft. I had to use an alternative which meant the aspect ratio was affected, but the feedback for the first draft was mostly positive regardless.
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